Space Rep: Captured Minds...that should be criminal. Is it illegal to capture minds?
Liza: You're the Space Rep. Don't they give you a manual that answers such questions.
Space Rep: No, I asked for the Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy instead.
Liza: That explains so much. Well, turn the transponder on and let's get the book over here so we can questions it.
Space Rep: Hold on, I'm cooking a souffle.
Liza: In a microwave? Give it up. Never happening. Get the book over her now!
Liza: Is that the book or your souffle?
Space Rep: Not sure.
Liza: Thank Goodness! Welcome Captured Minds. May I call you Cap.
Space Rep: Just agree with her, she's grumpy right now.
Cap: Why can't I be called Captured Minds?
Space Rep: Because Liza can't type correctly if your name exceeds three letters.
Cap: Ah I see. Hello... human,... I...am...a...book. Do... you... know... what... a... book... is?
Liza: Do you know what a paper shredders is?
Cap: *Pages flutter* Sorry, it seems I've opened up to the wrong page.
Liza: Not your fault. I'm just out of sorts with Space Rep.
Space Rep: Where'd my souffle go?
Cap: My author, Rebecca Odum, assumed it was for her. Looked really good.
Liza: Glad to hear it. Now tell me about yourself.
Cap: For the last decade, famine has gripped the once thriving land of Zoar.
Liza: That's not good. People get really grumpy when they don't eat.
Space Rep: Tell me about it.
Cap: With money and food dwindling, seventeen-year-old Raven
Montgomery longs for something more than working in the library.
Space Rep: She can have my job.
Liza: Ignore him. I want to know more about Raven.
Cap: Driven by her
love of learning, she enters a competition hosted by the Other World, where she
will test her knowledge in order to win supplies Zoar desperately needs.
Liza: excellent. I'm sure she'll win.
Cap: Before she can do so, Zoar’s ruler is killed, and hours
later the Other World closes its door.
Space Rep: How does a planet close it's doors?
Liza: Cap was speaking euphemistically. Right Cap?
Liza: I see, rather like adjoining rooms in a hotel. Now back to Raven. How'd she take the news of her ruler's demise and the euphemistic doors closing?
Cap: Raven can’t believe the two events are connected. Yet, when she stumbles across Other World technology that holds classified information, she learns there may be more to the competition than meets the eye.
Space Rep: Oh, I love finding classified information.
Cap: Sure that her ruler’s death is somehow linked, she now faces the challenge of revealing the truth behind the Other World’s sinister ways before both lands are changed forever.
Space Rep: How is she going to do that?
Cap: You must read the story to find out.
Liza: Then crack open your covers and give us a peek.
Cap: All right, but do not dog ear my pages.
Space Rep: I want to read this!
Liza: Then go find the link
Space Rep: Got it!
Space Rep: How does a planet close it's doors?
Liza: Cap was speaking euphemistically. Right Cap?
Cap: Nope. Zoar and the Other World are separated
by a tunnel and there is a door going into the tunnel and one on the other
side. The one leading into the Other World can only be opened from that side so
if they close it, people can go through the tunnel but they won’t be getting
into the Other World. Also, people can take a train from Zoar to the Other
World and that is how Raven and her friends get there.
Liza: I see, rather like adjoining rooms in a hotel. Now back to Raven. How'd she take the news of her ruler's demise and the euphemistic doors closing?
Cap: Raven can’t believe the two events are connected. Yet, when she stumbles across Other World technology that holds classified information, she learns there may be more to the competition than meets the eye.
Space Rep: Oh, I love finding classified information.
Cap: Sure that her ruler’s death is somehow linked, she now faces the challenge of revealing the truth behind the Other World’s sinister ways before both lands are changed forever.
Space Rep: How is she going to do that?
Cap: You must read the story to find out.
Liza: Then crack open your covers and give us a peek.
Cap: All right, but do not dog ear my pages.
Excerpt
Union City, Zoar
“Imagine never opening a
textbook or sitting at a desk. Imagine having the information you learn in
school being handed to you without lifting a finger. For the kids of today and
tomorrow, this can be a reality….”
The words blurred
together and Raven Montgomery rubbed her eyes. No homework? No tests? She
squinted at the tiny writing in the right hand corner. New York, it
read.
That’s in the Other
World. Maybe it’s magic after all.
On the bedside table,
her mirror flashed green. She snatched it up and found a new message. She
touched the screen, and the Ruler’s face appeared.
“Good evening, Zoarians.
I am pleased to announce that starting at nine tomorrow morning, the Competition
Board will be accepting applications.”
Raven turned off the
mirror and took in her wall-to wall bookshelves. In less than an hour, she’d
gather with kids who owned as many books as she did. Today
she wasn’t the lone girl no one understood, unable to control her need to voice
the information running through her head.
Bet everyone there can
pick up one of their books and recall every single word of information on every
page.
She slowly moved to her
chair and was halfway to the closet when her bedroom door
opened. Her older sister, Kate strode into the room, already dressed
in a white short-sleeved dress, a black belt around her waist. She'd pinned her
long, straight red hair in a bun. What stood out most was the red
lipstick, almost like blood next to her whitish complexion. Raven bit back a
laugh. She looked like one of those women in the magazines she’d found in the
attic once—perfectly put together.
“What?” Kate cocked her
head to the side. “Stop looking at me like that. I want to look my best.”
Raven’s giggle died, and
she put on her signature pout, used only in the presence of her family.
Since when did Kate care about looking her best?
Since when did Kate care about looking her best?
“And I don’t? Gee,
thanks.” She glided her hand along the row of dresses. “I have no
idea what to wear. Where’s Ava? She promised she’d help.” She usually threw on
the first unwrinkled dress, much to her other sister’s dismay, but today was
important.
“Ava said to wear
this.” Kate tossed a solid blue short-sleeved dress onto the
bed. “Hurry! Mom said we gotta leave in an hour.” She
patted Raven’s shoulder and walked out of the room.
Raven peeled off her
nightshirt and slipped on the dress. She ran a brush through her long, straight
black hair, pulled it back into a high ponytail and dug out her heels from the back
of the closet. With the folded application in her pocket, she made
her way into the living room. Ava, Kate’s twin, sat on the couch with her best
friend Maggie Tisdale,who was clad in her favorite red dress and black
heels. Maggie’s long blonde hair wasn’t in its usual braid,
but flowed freely down her shoulders.
“There you are.” Ava
said with a smile. “You both look beautiful. Blue is the perfect color on you.
Brian says there’s already a line.” She wrapped her flowered robe
around herself, her red hair in a messy bun—a far cry from the usual dresses,
makeup and fancy heels she wore every day.
“Let’s go! We’ll
be waiting in line until next Tuesday,” Maggie said, tugging on Raven’s arm. “I
want to get there before I lose my nerve.”
Raven started for the
door, but a sharp pain slicing through her temple and down her right arm and
leg made her freeze. In all the excitement, she hadn’t anticipated pain this
early.
How stupid can I be? Mom
will probably make me take my chair, too.
Tears prickled her eyelids,
but she refused to let them fall. She stood at Kate’s waist. People already
jumped to conclusions.
“Here, honey.” Her
mother’s hands were steady as she injected Raven with the needle and took a
step back. “Let me get a picture of you two.”
Raven sighed
and put her arms around Maggie’s shoulders, their heads touching.
There was no one else could she stand next to and not feel like an insect.
Since Maggie’s family had moved in across the street four years ago, the two
were
inseparable. She was grateful every day to have someone to share her unusual height, brittle bones, pain that felt like needles down her legs and arms and headaches with. Not to mention the need of a wheelchair.
inseparable. She was grateful every day to have someone to share her unusual height, brittle bones, pain that felt like needles down her legs and arms and headaches with. Not to mention the need of a wheelchair.
I better not need it
today.
“Okay. All done. Go have
fun.”
“Thanks!” Raven followed
Maggie outside. At the end of the drive a carriage waited, its doors open.
Brian, Ava’s fiancĂ©, stood next to it clad in his green Guard’s uniform. His
light brown hair was slicked back, a mischievous glint in his brown eyes.
“You’re the best guy Ava
could’ve picked to marry,” Raven said. She dangled the folded up piece of paper
in his face. “You think your new job can get me instant results?”
Brian laughed and patted
her arm. “Not a chance, little lady.” He opened the door and helped her and Maggie
inside. “I’ll be up front with the driver.”
She took in the familiar
scenes of the city as the carriage bounced down the street: people walking
along the sidewalks past the one-story brown houses that lined the street on
both sides, children holding hands as they walked to the schoolhouse, parents
on their way to work. It wasn’t hard to pick out those that were turning in
their application. People dressed up for the occasion. To have your name picked
to take the exam was an honor, and everyone took it seriously. The square
already swarmed with people when they approached the palace and the carriage
stopped a few blocks away. The line ran down the sidewalk, past the diner and
clothing store.
The early morning breeze
blew a strand of hair into her face as Brian lifted her out of the carriage.
Once Maggie was down, the two linked arms and made their way to the back of the
line. The sun radiated intense heat from a light purple sky, and Raven fanned
her face.
“I’ll see you
shortly.” Brian waved and disappeared through the gate to join the
other guards. The line inched forward and Raven could not hold back a grin. In
a few short minutes they’d deliver their application.
“I’m so nervous,” Maggie
said, twirling her hair around her left hand. “Why did I let you talk me into
this?”
Raven gently took
Maggie’s hand in her own. “You’ll be fine. We both will. We can do this.” The
line started to move and she pulled Maggie after her.
“Everyone, please hand
your application to the nearest guard and be on your way,” a guardsman shouted.
Murmurs floated through
the crowd as Raven searched for Brian. He’d know what the announcement was
about. He arrived by their side seconds later, his expression grave.
“What’s happening?” she
blurted.
“The Ruler was found
dead.”
Space Rep: Oh no!
Liza: Don't worry, I'm sure Raven is smart enough to figure this all out.
Space Rep: But she's not seeing the whole picture.
Liza: But she will. That's the great thing about smart people. They are always willing to reassess the situation when they get new data.
Space Rep: I want to read this!
Liza: Then go find the link
Space Rep: Got it!
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Liza: Good job, Space Rep. Can you find info about Rebecca.
Space Rep: On it!
RA Odum
grew up and still lives in Georgia. Her love for writing and stories started in
her grandmother's attic and never stopped. Born sixteen weeks early and loss of
vision in one eye, RA faces obstacles head on. From the time she was very
small, she has had a host of characters in her head, screaming for their
stories to be told. When she is not writing, she loves to spend time with her
family, sing and read. She also enjoys learning and teaching others American Sign Language. She hopes her novels will inspire
and make a difference.
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Cute interview :) Tweeted.
ReplyDeleteGreat post, but really, you have to stop threating books. Tweeted.
ReplyDeleteI really do. But this book talked down to me. That hurt my feelings.
DeleteLoved the interview but would love the recipe for the souffle. Anyway we can get that too? Tweeted. :)
ReplyDeleteHere's one for a chocolate souffle in the microwave:
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